Hi
Welcome, you’re in my blog!
My name Is Alejandro and I’m twelve years old.
My hobbies are:
-Football
I like the football because is very interested and funny.
-Tennis
I like because is exciting and funny. I have a great time.
I like most sports but my favorites are these.
I like my school because it is perfect. We study hard and play to different things.
Hi Alejandro! Very good introduction! I'm happy you like the school!
ResponderEliminarMISTAKES:
1)"I like my school but is perfect." Wrong word ("but"= "pero") and grammar mistake (you need a subject)--- "I like my school BECAUSE IT is perfect"
2)"Study hard and play to different things": Grammar mistake: You need a subject. "WE study hard...".
Please, make the corrections.